Monday, March 17, 2008
Marks
I found this poem interesting both from an enjoyment standpoint and also by looking at how it was written. The woman in the poem, a mother/wife, seems frustrated with the "marks" she is given by those around her. The author uses marks or grades to indicate how those around her see her and her actions. She is constantly graded on her performance, as if she were a student. As the poem moves along her marks lower and her anger and frustration builds. I'm not quite sure what the others motivation for writing this poem is, but it’s possible that she has experienced judgmental people in her time. In the end she says, "I'm dropping out" which signals the end of her dealing with the marks others give her. She will no longer be judged by others and is moving on with her life. I found the idea interesting and unique when I read the poem. It was different than the others and stood out to me.
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I liked this poem as well. I thought your comment that "As the poem moves along her marks lower and her anger and frustration builds" was interesting. I hadn't noticed this when I read the poem, but this is an insightful observation. This building of frustration would help explain the speaker's decision to "drop out" in the last line. Thanks for bringing up this part of the poem!
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